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I don't get the library tower puzzle embarrassingly 

Did you even look at their patreon?

Do not rush it.

The overhaul isn't that bad. Your doing fine. Is there going to be a mystery element in the story?

I see your point, and from what you stated you must have been or were a supporter, I understand the frustration better, I don't know if this is a team or one dude but they got to be careful when writing this. Still help the author so they can provide a better game.

That steam discussion page is worrying, guys actively wanted to bang a 7 year old short stack. Short stacks are fine. Haremon, Alvein, also Princess and Conquest has a lot of them none are confirmed children. I was looking forward to this game too but noticed Raury raised red flags, not sure if their is a patreon exclusive version with more story but with what was given publicly. Still looking forward for it just hoping there is a better story. Also pretty unfair to stop supporting them because of the overhaul.

Censoring how?

It doesn't load for me. The Mirror#1 Windows download.

I would mainly worry about the writing some said they work on adult scenes first. Isn't establishing character more important?

I must ask before this overhaul what was Raury's story suppose to be like originally, since the public build almost have no story it is understandable that their first impression with well people that look like her (Linda) is raising a bit of red flags. Though respectable choice for the overhaul, but if there was more of a story shown and her dialogue when you meet her for the first time changed, where she seem like she's playful for a young adult, would send less problems maybe. Would like to hear what you are thinking.

Oh. Wait what!?

You have a good point, the writing needs work. Check their "patron" though.

I kind of expected more, I am disappointed a bit. 

So the problems is the first the story abruptly ends and what is there is no character development to anyone yet, they all are casually asking this man to pull down his pants. Some people could mistake Linda as a child there is almost no info because she has no character. Same with Raury with the old patch who is a child like, I know short stacks are attractive to but the writing literally confirmed she is a child.

Second the combat, I learned it after trial and error it is boring because nothing unique other than timing and button to the critical point that does 1 shot with a bat that cost $100 dollars and spamming dexterity training. 

Third what relationships are they trying to portray, it is confusing there no dialogue just a massage option this random person we don't get to know all we do get to is she likes to play with a bunch of adult toys, like the main character's oldest sister which we learned from the youngest sister. Not to mention the weird oldest sister hating our guts because the father wasn't there probably because she wanted to get smashed by his huge dong, only reason why the mother married him btw.

The art is good but confusing on the sex, it's like your cumming at every thrust. As well as most characters here have the same body... and face...Backgrounds are great though and when they are finished being colored it would look even better.

My opinion but what do you guys think?